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by cruttan

person Anon
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. PLease!!! UPDATE SOON!!
person Vashka
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erhm... So I didn\'t review the last chapter. Eep! My only excuse was that I have had some horrible RL issues (and I\'ve been sick). bleh. So I\'ll try to leave an extra-special review this time! I think your story is turning out to be a cute little piece of fluff. Very enjoyable... like cotten candy. Or marshmallows. mmmm... am making myself hungry. Anyway, The progression of the relationship is going well. Meeting the parents is a very big step. Usually I don\'t like Hermione\'s parents in a fanfic because I despise original characters, but your parents were pretty believable. And likable- thanks for that! Although I was initially surprised by Richard\'s quick acceptance of Draco, I can see that it works in a way. Not too shabby, but perhaps you should have lengthened their animosity? It makes for good hunor, anyway :P And the smut... you have such a lovely knack for description. mmm... Keep up the good work Catherine, and I\'ll heep reading!

PS- I am trying out the LJ thing as well and also get confuzzled (username vashka_kat). I may try to friend you in the near future, if I can figure out how to do it :P
person Petalsoft
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice scene at the Granger household. LOL Such a protective dad! Good thing Draco took it so well. And the sex was yummy too. It seems Draco is beginning to get comfortable with the L word - good for him! Looking forward to more.

Oh, yeah, someone did hack into my story. :( A bit disappointing when that happens. It could have been worse though. He or she could have added a really bad chapter. LOL I guess I should look on the bright side.

person SlythErin
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe...I love angry Mr. Granger. It totally reminds me of bringing my ex home for Christmas a few years back. I was raised in the midwest, very rural community, and my oldest brother is probably one of the biggest redneck grease monkeys you\'ll ever lay eyes upon. Needless to say when you bring a strict PETA worshipping vegan home for him to converse with, hilarity definately ensues.

Great chapter! Can\'t wait to see what those two are up to next.

Hehehe...Poor Crookshanks...so much he reminds me of my kitters...
person Michelle
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another great chapter!! I have to admit I was really nervous about how it would go with Hermione\'s parents, but I was so happy with how it went! I loved how after a rocky start with draco and Hermione\'s father really got along with the conversation concerning hermione\'s safety...that was really good. Oh and I love the smug draco remark when they were leaving( the i told you so...all parents love me lol) that was so draco...I love it when those bits of him peak out...teasingly of course!

as always, amazing job on this story! I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

Michelle
person tashi
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful
person Debi
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Cat!

This just keeps getting better and better I love it so much!!!
I love the last chapter, meeting Mr. and Mrs. Granger! Perfect!
Just to funny! I love how you made Draco so caring towards Hermione,
But the same time he\'s still himself in ways. Like his familiar smirks.
Or his sense of having to tease Hermione, or her friends. But you know,
In a nice way. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!! Hope your Thanksgiving,
Is a wonderful one and Take care dear, post more soon.


<3 Debi!
person firewall
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve seen this story up many times and for whatever reason, never opened it to read. Well, I\'m kicking myself now because I have been missing a really good story and good writing. I\'m only on chapter three but will definitely continue reading and reviewing.
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck is wrong with you? this was good but now it sucks. are tehy going to ever have real sex?
person Witchiepooh
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Draco stopped, shivering slightly.