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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person Cappuccino
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this piece. Even without a formal proposal it was so romantic. Great work!
person lemonade
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just... AWWWW....!!!! I thought it would be a few chapters of Hermione trying to fix what she screwed up, but Draco pulled through like a real man and didn't let her wallow. Good man!! Now, on to the honeymoon!!! ;D (wait, I mean... on to the wedding!)
person moonjameskitten
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh ! My Godness ! this is so LOVELY-ROMANTIC !! I could never get used of that !! I love romantic lines like that !! No matter how ridiculous I could seem : I enjoyed reading that chapter ! lol ! Drama-queen-Hermione ! lol !

One of my favorite lines ?

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person Emily
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person Amada
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Over so soon? ::weeps:: I actually cried...wait, I am still crying. I believe you got the desired effect from your readers. Goodness it was brilliant. I hate drama that is written badly for it is most frustrating. But you are a very talented writer. I loved it!!!! ::wipes tear from eye:: BRAVO!
person RahNee
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I want to know what secret power Richard Granger has to leave strapping young men pale and fearful for their lives! Heh heh. The meeting of the parents was cute, especially how Mr. Granger warmed to Draco. Draco\'s smug \"I told you so\" attitude was funny.

I really like how you write the lovemaking scenes. They are tasteful, yet HOT! LOL. And they are using the L-word now! Whee! You write Draco so dreamingly romantic. He says the right things, and he is so swoon-worthy. I\'m jealous of Hermione!!! I\'ve always been a sucker for the romantic-at-heart rogue. Sigh.

I was inspired by a little plot bunny to write a scene for my prequel that I confessed to you about, and it is a bit of a romantic scene. I\'m glad I stopped to read this first, b/c it has gotten my romantic creative juices flowing. Ahem, did I just say \"juices flowing?!\" (groans at unintentional double-entendre) Whew! Is it getting warm in here? LOL.

OK, Cat, darling. It was a lovely chapter, and of course this is the part where I become quite the demanding reader and insist that you get another chapter posted ASAP! LIKE NOW! I don\'t care that you are making nice with the in-laws and stuffing yourself with turkey sandwiches, girl, you MUST get to work! Hee hee.

Love ya, darling!
Ronnie

person YumLovely
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. I\'m finally at home...and I can\'t sleep. SO this is a welcome distraction. And an appropriately loving atmosphere. I like the interludes of tender moments. It satisfies my need for romance and simple pleasures in such an hectic and wild, fast world. Amusing and beautiful.
person YumLovely
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. I\'m finally at home...and I can\'t sleep. SO this is a welcome distraction. And an appropriately loving atmosphere. I like the interludes of tender moments. It satisfies my need for romance and simple pleasures in such an hectic and wild, fast world. Amusing and beautiful.
person YumLovely
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. I\'m finally at home...and I can\'t sleep. SO this is a welcome distraction. And an appropriately loving atmosphere. I like the interludes of tender moments. It satisfies my need for romance and simple pleasures in such an hectic and wild, fast world. Amusing and beautiful.
person dragon34
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait to read more. I had to read it all before i reviewed. I loved the sexiness of Draco. and the total approval of both of their parents. I could see Hermione down in Draco\'s dungeons, only for sex games, could be interesting. I was expecting Hermione\'s mom to give Draco a picture of Hermione as a baby running around naked, it would have been too cute.