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by cruttan

person anjellic
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter, although a proper proposal might be nice in the next chapter *wink wink* I\'d love to see how Draco would propose. All in all....really enjoyed it
person Kyrian
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cutie!! That was great! I love this whole story but that chapter was adorable! do go on...there needs to be more =)
ooo I just love it!!
person GriseldaMarchbanks
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. What a wonderful way to engage the two. I love this chapter; and couldn\'t help but smile at Hermione\'s idiocy (analytical minds do tend to over-analyze every situation). Well written, well played, well done!
GM
person Bookworm1214
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It just keeps getting better with each chapter. I just hope that there are no more chapters in which Hermione has to question Draco's faithfulness. It's getting hard to believe that he could live with someone that insecure or that she would be that way. Maybe you should build some drama between HERMIONE and some OTHER guy.
person yaness
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is pretty good, but you always make hermione seem so bratty and insecure.
person NAR
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that was sweet. Great chapter as always. Update sooner! I almost forgot what the story was about. Almost. ;)
person aleja21
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like, great chap, also in the email. you mentioned a live journal, what is the address for it? could you please mail it to me? thanx and i really like the chap. i did feel a little sorry for draco.
person Primero
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, as always =).

I love how you put some, to quote the name of the chapter, drama in your story too. That way it's not butterflies and rainbows the entire time. As much as we all love our fluff, it can be quite boring if it's all the story contains of.

We all know that it's going to end well, so it's worth waitig for =).

I'm excited to see how you're going to end this story. And I'll be with you the rest of the way!


- Primero
person Safira
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just got into this story a few days ago. I don't usually read WIPs because they make me curious, but couldn't help myself with this one. It's really sweet, just the way I love it.
The last chapter was nice, but as someone already mentioned, I really hope Hermione stops with this whole insecurity thing. If she wants this relationship to work, she has to learn to trust him. Draco is being wonderful to her and honestly, it's not everyone that can really tolerate such lack of trust, and unfortunately Hermione has continuosly failed to show some. I hope that from now, she trusts him more, especially now that he popped "The Question" (not too conventional, but then since when is he conventional, no?).
Awesome story, I hope you update soon!
person Sygnus
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent... Draco as always smooth as glass.. I feel for Monie she just seems to make one mess after another.. I love it.. Will you go on? The idea of seeing Draco dealing with twin some where down the line is just to funny for words.. Wouldn't mind seeing cool Draco making a major blunder or two.. and letting Monie being the Smoother.. or Hell fire and brimstone LOL... As always wonderful Job Cat.. I can't wait for the next installment!