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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person YumLovely
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ---
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! He's so sweeet!!! I'm so happy!
Great job with this story! Keep up the great work!!!
person Emmeline Vance
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey again!

Hope you've had a great thanksgiving, and can't wait to read more of your writing. I absolutely loved Draco's nonchalance towards the proposal, and am so excited! Hermione's so unbelievably insecure, and I think it complements Draco's slight arrogance fantastically. The chapter was wonderfully teary, and I hope there'll be more to read from you soon. Peace!

Love, me.
person Liz
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Cathy, are you kidding?! It was fabulous!!! I loved it!! Especially with the whole; "she's a menace to society without me", and of course I swooned: "you can't stand to be without me!!!". Ya hit pay dirt girl; simply gorgeous
person Debi
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Cat!!!!!


Oh Cat I loved this chapter so much!! It made me cry, because I could so feel everyone you put in your chapter!! Poor Hermione and her insecurities, I sure know how she would feel!! Great chappy Cat!! I can't wait to see what you have up your sleve for the next post!! Sorry this review isn't as big as the other's but I'm kinda busy!! But I wanted to see what you had put and I'm glad I did!!! Can't wait for you next post!!! Your great!!
person mira
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whimpers..... More story now!!! Wonderful Chapter, your nails are obviously unfairly abused.
person Michelle
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you possibly be nervous about this chapter?? It was amazing! I loved it! You could never just have a normal proposal between the two of them! This was soo much better!! and ...HE PROPOSED!! YAY! I was "squeeing" all over the place while reading this chapter! It was great! I am going to read it again right now hehe. I loved the its about time someone looked after her, she'd be a menace to society with out me. Great line! so Draco.

Fantastic chapter...was there ever any doubt? There was no need to be nervous about it...at least not any that I can see.

Great job...as always, I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen next!

~Michelle~
person Pam
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Serenity
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! I was going to cry, that was adorable. *mumbles about her crappy life*
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! Il ove it! I hope you go on with the story still!! If u do ~crosses fingers~ update soon.