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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for quite some time now and have really been enjoying it. The one problem I have with the story though, is that you make Hermione so stupid. Every once in a while it's fine for a character to do something irrational and spontanious that ends badly... or at least awkwardly. However, seeing as the character is Hermione Granger (one of the most rational and thoughtful of people in the wonderful world of Harry Potter) these irrational outbursts are cut down to about one very well deserved per story (2 for a story of the same length or longer than your own). It does get annoying when the main Character is breaking down in almost every chapter. Other than that, I really like the story and ofter check for updates. Good luck with the Dangerous Liaisions Awards!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippee!! He finally proposed .... or did he? (mimicking Ginny) Hee, hee. Great chapter but too short! Can't wait for more trials and tribulations. Keep up the great work. :-)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i absolutly loved it!!
i cant wait for more!!
i liked the whole fiasco w. hermione running away from draco and him tackling her...its so them!
:) update ASAP!!
mucho luv
Kristal
i cant wait for more!!
i liked the whole fiasco w. hermione running away from draco and him tackling her...its so them!
:) update ASAP!!
mucho luv
Kristal
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was waiting until I got to the end to review, but lemme tell you, it was hard. My God, this was awesome. It was so funny. And though I thought their relationship progressed a bit quickly, it was really good all the same. I loved you characterization of the parents in this fic (Lucius, Narcissa; Jane, Richard). And the banter between Hermione and Draco was utterly priceless. Especially when he was down south for a meal and she kept closing her legs. I laughed so hard at that. I mean, thevisual image is just so friggin' funny!
And Hermione's jealousy was awesomely written too. I loved how she tried to get back at Draco by flirting with other guys, and his reaction was priceless--that awesome possessive Draco reared his head, and I loved him to death. Not that I don't love the normal Draco. I drool everytime I read a description of his utter sexiness. lol.
Anyway, like I said before, awesome, AWESOME work. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Truth
And Hermione's jealousy was awesomely written too. I loved how she tried to get back at Draco by flirting with other guys, and his reaction was priceless--that awesome possessive Draco reared his head, and I loved him to death. Not that I don't love the normal Draco. I drool everytime I read a description of his utter sexiness. lol.
Anyway, like I said before, awesome, AWESOME work. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Truth
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Wimpers* awe that was so sweet *continues to wimper*. Sorry very short review this time as I somehow managed to bang my head into the desk as I was putting the plug in...I now feel quite dizzy, but I had to read the new chapter before I went to sort my head out he he. I know my prorities. Don't know why you were nervous though it was as fantastic as alwayas. Draco's reactions to Hermione were brilliant... oh and yay he asked her to marry him, I had such a big grin on my face at the end of that chapter.
I can't understand some of the more negative attention it has gotten recently, I know everyones entitled to their own opinion but some of the more negative reviews just havn't made much sence to me at least. Anyway I really need to go fix my head, thankyou for another fantastic chapter and as always I can't wait for more again now.
I can't understand some of the more negative attention it has gotten recently, I know everyones entitled to their own opinion but some of the more negative reviews just havn't made much sence to me at least. Anyway I really need to go fix my head, thankyou for another fantastic chapter and as always I can't wait for more again now.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Right... who took the bloody tissues!
This was brilliant! Another wonderful chapter. I got all sniffly, especially at the end there. I can not wait for the next update... please tell me that Rita Skeeter wrote the article cos, that's just so her. I did love Ginny though: "I didn't actually hear a proposal." hehehe.
Update soon! please!
Bek
This was brilliant! Another wonderful chapter. I got all sniffly, especially at the end there. I can not wait for the next update... please tell me that Rita Skeeter wrote the article cos, that's just so her. I did love Ginny though: "I didn't actually hear a proposal." hehehe.
Update soon! please!
Bek
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hermione is a psycho! she's really crazy. but yaaay they're getting married! woohoo, romantic chapter. update soon please :-)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! That was such an awesome chapter!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. good good. maybe add a little of what draco is feeling when he feels that hermione doesnt trust him...otherwise excellent. keep it up!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee! I love misunderstandings...well, as long as it works out okay in the end. I found myself wanting to smack Hermione silly for jumping to conclusions! And I totally felt for Draco asking her to at least tell him what he'd done, sounding so desperate! And this part just broke my heart: