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for Catalyst

by cruttan

person Dixi19
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies*

The growling, the "you're mine" Guh.

No words.
person jchaser
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter...especially loved the last bit - too cute.
person Selena
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mucho kudos!!!
I'm loving it!
Please please update!
person misty676
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have nothing to worry about this story is so full of drama that i can honestly say that i found my own teen soap-opra keep updating
person Sexy Relly
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue!
person Allie-Oop
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Love Love Love. It's so *sigh* romantic. And it feels like it could almost happen. Good on you
person fandango2
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i' ve been reading this story from the start and let me tell you it is one of the best i have ever read!

its soooooooooo sweet
person DaM
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like how you write, but i must be honest... i can't stand your portrayal of hermione. how many times is she going to jump to such crazy conclusions? i have just never imagined the character with such little self-confidence. i don't know how draco could possibly put up with all her emotional outbursts. i hope that she grows a backbone for the rest of the story... its such a shame that you couldn't have written her a little closer to the canon hermione. i just can't stand how many times she has burst into tears, only t be comforted by such a forgiving Draco. It's all a bit much to digest. Then again, i prefer a D/Hr relationship based on sexual tension and when they battle wits with each other.

i was looking to see if you have other stories to see if you wrote her in the same way. i hope that after this, you will write another with a much stronger, less paranoid Hermione
person kaha
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my...
This is undeniably perfect. I haven't found a good piece of work like this in so long.
Amazing, utterly amazing work!!
I look forward to the next chapter...
person SJ
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I made it through - it was a long and arduous process, but I managed to trudge through it from beginning to end aaaaaaaaand . . . .

I'm full of crap! This was a delightful story to read - fun and fluffy, a little angsty and chock full of ups and downs, but happy all the same. There's nothing arduous about it! You have a great sense of humor, Cat, and Draco positively oozes with wit in this story - and excellent comedic timing, always popping up out of nowhere. Hermione definitely has insecurity issues, but considering her past and recent trauma, who wouldn't?

I definitely think a marriage between these two characters would involve LOTS of compromise and arguing and subsequent make up sex, but it would work because they're passionate - about each other and their beliefs.

Anywhooooooooooo, Cat, you're a doll and it's always a pleasure conversing with you at 'keys'!

Keep up the excellent writing!

Always,
SJ

'I am guided by a force much greater than luck.'

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