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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like. Are you goiing to continue? I hope so. This would be a good one for many chappies, I think!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Beautiful! I totally loved this. I thought y ou had some problem with sentence structure (it could be that I just can\'t read...) but really, I thought it was very good. You did an awesome job with this. I\'ve never really read anything like it.
Good work!
Truth
Good work!
Truth
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eloquently written. I usually don\'t like \"club\" settings but you managed it quite well.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This same story (with Harry as the male) is up on Portkey--I don\'t know who put this story up first, but if it is yours, you might want to email Portkey so they can take it down.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This well-written!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Amazing imagery in this story. Wonderfully written. I\'m sitting here eating my lunch, and actually forgot to chew, I was so wrapped up in this. Will definitely be looking for more of your stories. Great job! Taa!
Zoltaire the Inscrutable
Zoltaire the Inscrutable
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good.
I hope you continure to write stories.
I hope you continure to write stories.