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Missed me? *lol* I have been gone for a couple of days, and look at what I come back to! Yeah! OK, so I loved the \'flowers while I breathe\' scene. Sheer beauty. I loved it. The fight was very graphic and exciting, of course. I was very worried for moment when both of them were at Death Eater\'s mercy. But....hooray for house elves! Man, they come to the rescue all the time! Eli is just the cutest. Master and his secret....too precious. I am happy Hermione was the one who killed Draco. At least the other Death Eaters will know a new threat is out there and not dare to come back for more! Lovely as always. It is so nice to read more than one chapter at a time! Looking forard to your lemons ahead!

OHHHHH! PLEASE UPDATE! I CAN\'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!

Tiffany

Ch 29

I am at a loss for words. Utterly brilliant, doesn\'t seem to do this justice. There are so many elements to this story. It\'s spellbinding, so original... and... well... brilliant!

You are really great!!!!

Your storry is breathtaking and I hope you will write a lot more, even after the end of this fic.


Thank you

Sandra

bloody briliant!! I believe you that this was a hard chapter to write but you did an excellent job :)
well, now we just have to wait for the happy ending...lol (and maybe some lemons?)

Chapter 29 - WELL DONE! It was very realistic and filled with emotion, which gave strength to the story line and characters. Draco\'s hatred almost gave me shivers. I cackled with glee when Eli, Leaf Ear, and the rest showed up to help. (Vicious little creatures when pissed off.)

The tender moment at the end between Severus and Hermione was also very touching. Hopefully, you

Ch 28 - ack! Do I want the next chapter tonight or tomorrow .... hmm, if you promise to not kill Leaf Ear, Eli, or the other house elves, I can wait until tomorrow, \'cuz if you post tonight you might get impatient and kill off an elf, and I don\'t want that. Thanks for explaining about the park names - if only Hermione hadn\'t been so unclear in her itinerary!

WOW! That was a scene and a half! It was very powerfully written and kept me at the edge of my seat the entire time. You gave no real indication that they would be able to win against the deatheaters. Draco had to go...otherwise as Minerva thought, the killings would continue. Draco was too firm in his beliefs and they would never let him rest until Hermione, Snape and others were removed from the earth.

I hope you update soon, we need a little closure to this part of the story. I\'m saying this part of the story because I\'m certain you will find another plot to involve these two in...they just won\'t leave you alone, will they? Wonderfully written.

Wow! You wrote Draco\'s death brilliantly! Well done! I love the way you incorporated the House - elves into it too... it was brilliant! It left me speechless for a few moments so that should give you some idea how brilliant it was!