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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Lily of the Valley
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i had to laugh. she is so obviously not kung-fu material. however, i trust a certain slytherin to bring out her inner Jet Li
person Alyse
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I heart you so so so so much! This is by far the absotule BEST story i have ever read. You write so well. I had to review at this chaper instead of when i got done just because i had to tell you how wonderfull all the stories have been so far. I love you so much right now becuase its awsome to actally see what happens after they get together! No one has ever done that. They always just say \"and years down the road they get married and have kids. The end\" but not you. you continued the story inbetween. Its so wonderful to be able to read so many different stories about 1 couple. I love the way you write too. at the end of this chapter normally the author would have said, \"and then hermonie tured to snape and he hugged her.\" but not you you described her shock, the knife falling, the feeling of snaps arms wrapped around her and his head on top of hers and the flower oh! it was so beautiful! i almost cried. i probably would have if my roomie hadn\'t woken up. i have been up the past 2 nights stright reading these stories and i still have what...4 more to go! i can\'t wait to see what else happens. ooo when they get married! i probably will cry...espically with the beautifuly elegant way you write. And the story line. How one thing leads into another. Most people just say one thing and never bring it up again. But you oH! you plot and scheem. its so wonderful! if these characters wern\'t copyrighted these stories would make the best after the story book ever written. Never stop writting. NEVER. you will make sooooo many peopel very sad. you will make me cry. thank you for adding your wonderful talent to this world. and trust me i will review again.
person Liza
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought the whole thing was retarded. I love Snape, and you made him seem horny and stupid.
person TNgirl
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I really enjoyed reading it! I\'ll look for more stories from you! Thanks for a great read!
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved your story it was great
person Cher
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I am a puddle. That ending was like...fireworks! You write the most unbelievable smut scenes, truly amazing. Everything about this fic was so totally hot! The plot was fantastic, I\'ve always loved a xena/lara croft-like-ass-kickin-feminista! Awesome, awesome, awesome!
person Diane
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good story. I spend a delicious time reading it
person Darque Hart
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t usually make comments mid-story [as I am reading through from the beginning WWIT], but this chapter is so funny. Changing the horrid Death Eater robes/masks into flowerpower prissies was too much. Then the idiot Draco hands his hat off to the elf!

You have quickly become one of my favorite authors. I do hope you continue to come up with more SS/HG stories to entertain;-)
person Sonia
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!! Very well written!!! Thanks for the lemons in the end, I loved it.. Thank you for writting this!!!
Cheers, Sonia