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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person thru and thru
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looks gud so far please pdate soon
person lorna
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
again another good story i will be reading Ms figg (Smile)
person JW
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - eeks..... This chapter was lovely in just how much Severus loves her, funny with Ron\'s reaction to Hermione\'s defense, and heartbreaking in how much Severus fears for her life and fears she will hate him. Now, if her \"training starts tonight,\" why is she leaving in the morning?
person lemonade
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... this is a BAD idea of Severus\'. Very bad. He/Albus could have motivated her with the information and pictures BEFORE resorting to harming her \'for her own good\'. I\'m thinking Severus will deserve to lose her by the end of this, if we\'re to go by the way he is talking. I won\'t blame her, either, at this point. And where are the aurors hunting down these death eaters?? Will she be able to wear any portkeys or such? Are those viable options in this fic? She\'s just to try to get away from him, right. But 5 TIMES IN A ROW?? What a zealot. I\'m looking forward to Hermione kicking his backside in the further chapters. ;D
person ancientgirl
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I tawt I taw a Severus tat. Excellent chapter. That little bit you added in the first chapter helped give a bit more insight. I\'m wondering though it this list is real, but it doesn\'t matter if it is or not. Hopefully it put the fear of god into her and she will actually allow herself to be taught.
person Snapelover11
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Severus...he is relentless...so he\'s going to jump her from behind in the corridor! hehehe...oh, I hope this is enough to make her train! I can see him turning into the \"mysterious Death Eater\" and stalking her! Oh...great confusion could come from this! My wheels are turning now....
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JW: Training starts tonight...one word...Abstinence

ANON: Snapeslover11 is pretty much on point. All I can ask is that you continue to read or bail on this one. Hope you see it through though.

LEMONADE: I\'m sure Hermione will utilize whatever is necessary. She\'s brilliant after all. Being muggle-born allows her to think in a manner outside the wizard-norm, which is a big advantage. What isn\'t available, she could probably create. I agree however, helpful doodads are definitely in order, and in the words of Mr. F. Gump, that\'s all I have to say about that.

ALL: Let\'s not underestimate Hermione, alright? You know she\'s a zealot at anything she applies herself to. You see what happened to poor Ron. She thought he was Severus. Didn\'t hesitate. For all we know...she\'ll beat the crap out of/escape Sev every single time. lol He might be agonizing over nothing, underestimating \"his woman\" as men often do. Let\'s just see where the story goes a\'ight? a\'ight? Much love
person Amy
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your stories. They are the best Hermione/Snape fics I\'ve ever read!! KEEP IT COMING! :)
person Maria
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far!
person Snapelover11
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! I am so angry right now! How could you do this???!!! No sex? For weeks? That\'s like...10 chapters???? So he\'s going to do \"terrible things\" to her? Oh no. But hermione loves him. She will remember that he\'s doing it for her own good...right? RIGHT? Oh and btw, yes...I was wrong. It wasn\'t Severus...just Ron. *sighs* I hope you updated quickly. I can not go a long time without updates. I look forward to your story so much everyday. I get all excited when I see an new chapter!

Thanks Ms_Figg!