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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person Lioncourt
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! You cant stop there! This is brilliant! UPDATE!
person Megan
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK I\'m addicted!!! Please keep updating - update as quickly as you\'re doing now, it\'s great!! Though I\'m dying for Snape to come back into the main action. SO curious about the door in the wall. Thank you for a great story!
person JW
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10-11 - what a fabulous idea, another Room of Requirement at headquarters!! And those golems are great for training, as she can do anything to them. I wonder if anyone is looking for Draco, and if Hermione can get Harry\'s Marauders\' Map, especially to spot Pettigrew. Those charms on her new bracelet - a flame, a stone, a clock and an ear - what do those do? Flame-thrower, rock, Time Turner, and a listening device?? I wouldn\'t mind a charm bracelet with an emergency Portkey and some healing potions. Thanks for the new chapters!!
person Koda
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for hot, kinky sex.
person JW
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 - thanks for the lemon break! I\'m glad Kingsley and Tonks are happy together.
person Allie
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everyone needs a break for a lemon :) That was a partically hot one too, and I don\'t think any girl would object to dreaming that!

I\'m actually more anxious to see how this fic progresses and turns out more so than \"What Was I Thinking?\" ... That\'s saying a lot considering WWIT is definately in my top 5 favorite fics. You\'re an excellent writer and I\'m glad you take your time with the plot and let things fall into place instead of jumping all around. Even the dialogue is perfect between characters.

Can\'t wait for another update!
person Stormi
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 - Loved the lemon break. You make such good lemonade. I\'ve really got to tell you though that I don\'t relish the thought of Hermione being sexually assaulted and hope you will give us fair warning if you decide to go that route.

Thanks again for the newest chapter.


Stormi

person JW
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - hmm, should Elton tell them that \"someone\" was watching them exit his shop? \"Someone\" who might ambush her when she returns to his shop, before getting her toys? I wonder what \"toys\" Harry himself has? Thanks for posting!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the break, dearie! It was very much appreciated! Update soon! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Your\'s always,
Killer K
person JW
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - ooh, Draco sounds like a great villain here, with tons of motivation and money to do the deed. Isn\'t anyone from the Ministry keeping an eye on him? I wonder if Pettigrew is among the Death Eaters that Draco is hiding. Thanks for updating!!