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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person JW
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - hey, that wasn\'t much of a fight, him giving in only after two losses. And what are those three other charms she has on her bracelet? Shouldn\'t he have been expecting her to go after his baubles - and worn a protective cup? Besides, your story title is \"Wars\" - so there will be more \"wars\" coming up? Oh well, they\'re off now to kill Draco? (hoping)
person JW
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - this was so sweet and sad! Dumbledore really touched on all the salient points - Severus\' reasons for his actions, and what is at stake for her success. He acknowledges caring for both S&H, and changes Hermione\'s motivation to succeed from \"I\'ll prove Severus wrong, that I *can* protect myself\" to \"I love Severus.\" I do hope she does her five consecutive escapes all in one night so they can get back to real shagging, and to killing off Draco. Doesn\'t that sound romantic? Killing off Draco?
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 - Oohhh, aaahhh, looks like things are going to get very nasty for a while. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Keep up the great work.


Stormi

person Stormi
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 - Let the games begin. I really hope she teaches Snape a lesson!

Stormi

person JW
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - yay, she\'s ready!! Self-defense preparation is mostly mental - she had to be in the right frame of mind to do it, and it\'s clear that she is ready now. Of course, it helps to know that her opponents are much stronger and more experienced than her Hogwarts peers. Havings Tonks do Lucius was great. Go, Hermy!
person Snapelover11
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Time for the real stuff now baby! Oh I loved the training. hermione is a total badd-ass now, eh? I can not wait to see her go toe to toe with Severus. It should prove to be very exciting. Waiting and waiting for more...as always!
person Koda
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for chapter twelve!
person Sari
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More?? Yes??
person JTBJAB
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh i can\'t wait for Hermione to kick butt!!!!
person jane
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow so many chapters. It is getting so very exciting now. I can hardly wait. Great great stuff