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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We had the fighting action, now we need the bedroom action!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 - I\'m a little surprised that Severus gave in so easily but am glad that he seems to respect her and her abilities. I think that if it had gone any further, he would always remember it and it might cause friction in their relationship.
Hopefully, we\'ll get some more lemons in the next chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon!
Stormi
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I don\'t like that she bested him so easily. I\'d have liked to see him win once. I think she still doesn\'t get the reality of what can happen to her. And if I recall she used one of the charms she had, something she may not always have. I\'m not condoning having him beat the crap out of her, but I really don\'t think it should have been that easy for her.
I\'m looking forward to more.
I\'m looking forward to more.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I m a sucker for a author who udates as much as you! lol Keep it up!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Severus isn\'t going to cheat is he? He is a bad boy if he is!
I look forward to your next update!
I look forward to your next update!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! Go Hermione! Now they can get back together! - - - I hope!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! It ended so easily! Ok, so are we gonna see some bedroom action with the same force as the fight? Keep going! :)
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I love the fact she is confident, I think that has more to do with those probably concealed weapons she had made. I love that she was smart enough to think of making these things. But I would hope she isn\'t going to rely solely on those things to get her thorugh this. I don\'t want to see her fail, but I would also want her to realize that in the outside world she might not always have those weapons. That was the whole point of Severus wanting her to learn hand to hand fighting.
Curious for more.
Curious for more.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12 - yikes! Is he going to forget himself and REALLY hurt her?? Is she really that angry still that he thought she wouldn\'t be able to fight him off? That\'s a pretty nasty comment about using his bits for a male enhancement potion.... better tell the other teachers and students to clear the halls!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK!!! here we go!! *rubs hands together grinning like an idiot* I can\'t wait! I can\'t wait! I can\'t wait! Hurry please Ms_Figg! I never beg you, but this is a special request. I simply can not wait too long for this, for I might die of anticipation!