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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person angel
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man draoc is crazy i hope mione and snape have a little fun befor mr. \"carzy mood pants\" malfoy come and muck things up ... update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person deathraven
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i can\'t wait for the next chapter i LOVE this story!!! UPDATE UPDATE!!!
person JTBJAB
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... those \"jewellery\" are sooo cool - i want them! Lol! Great chapter... and Hermione getting a reward - mmm...
person Snapelover11
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco is a prat! He has some horrible, wicked plans for our little miss Granger. Damn...she better watch out!
person beeky63
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are building the tension deliciously. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next. keep writing and keep up the good work. I just love your stories.
Toodles.
person jane
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous you are brilliant in building up tension.Again I am dying to know what will happen
person Koda
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco is a coward. He couldn\'t do any of that.
person anya
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
person JW
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 19 - so she\'s not going to tell him where she got the jewelry from? She\'s not going to get anything for him? Sniff.... poor Sevvie, no presents. BTW, I really like his poor raven: \"feather duster\" indeed! Also liked his line: \"Accept no substitutions.\" S&H don\'t have a code word for the two of them, in case a Polyjuiced impostor or another golem tries to sneak past them? Thanks for the new chapter!!
person JTBJAB
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please update soon!