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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person lovethelab
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sniff, Sniff Severus is so sweet sometimes. I really love your stories and I am gald you update so frequently - - I am sure it is hard to be able to do that and I wanted to let you know that I for one am grateful to read something new and satisfying! almost everytime I log on.
person JTBJAB
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well wasn\'t that a chapter full of surprises!?! Well done and I look forward to the next chapter - I just feel slightly sorry for the Barmaid - but then if you can\'t do the time, you shouldn\'t do the crime!
person angel
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is getting better abd better as you go please update soon i cant wait in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person ancientgirl
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww....poor Severus. I felt so bad that she didn\'t remember what she wore their first time. Unless she did actually do that to distract him. And I get the feeling that watching Draco and Crabbe and Goyle are like watching the 3 Stooges.
person angel
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please more more write more and sooooooooooooooon this is awesome in till next time keep it up

angel
person JTBJAB
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a sweet ending! Thank you for that! Well done and i look forward to the next chapter!
person Koda
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If he hurts Snape.. I\'ll- wait, bleeding, angry Sevvykins is kind of hot. xD
person lauren
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey that was really good. The best one iv read so far. Its good because you dont make snape out to be some mushy idiot when he\'s in love he\'s still sarcastic, strong and goddam sexy.
Good job keep writing i cant wait to read more
person Snapelover11
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The fight/practice scene was very good. I llike it that Severus has such a aweak spot for white sundresses. It is precious! Uh...so Draco. What a git. He certainly is underestimating Hermione, huh? Can\'t wait to see what she does to them. Since Crabbe and Goyle are impotent now, is she safe from them harming her in the middle of battle? Loved it MS_Figg!
person JW
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20 - and the Order has a meeting at Rosmerta\'s.... and Raucous pecks out Draco\'s eyes.... and the Malfoy house elves get to \"clean house\" of Crabbe, Goyle, etc. and hang Draco\'s head on the wall! Nope, I don\'t like this Draco at all. I just hope there\'s enough of Draco for both Severus and Hermione and Raucous!