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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person ancientgirl
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs* Very lovely. Sometimes these little touching moments are just as good if not better than the smutty ones.
person JW
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 21 - ack!! She\'s not going to buy Severus any \"deterrrent\" jewelry, is she? Groan.... Not even a spare wand, in case the baddies break his? They WILL tell the Order members and Aurors to be there and at Malfoy Manor? Yikes! (bites fingernails)
person Firewall
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL The od softie! Obviously, he is a closet romantic, remembering her white sundress. Then again, maybe not!

I liked the quiet reaffirmation at the end of the last chapter. I\'m a little worried reading the chapter title though...I do hope they make it back to Hogwarts.
person firewall
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
btw, that post was supposed to read old softie...not od softie.
person Laura
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most excellent! I can\'t wait to read more and see how this plays out! Man, I hope neither of them accidentally says \'thantos.....\'
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope their plan works and they beat Draco. This story is so awsome! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person Koda
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the next chapters.
person Stormi
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21 - He just can\'t resist her. This story just keeps getting better and better.
Keep up the great work.

Stormi

person Stormi
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22 - What a lovely and tender chapter. I can\'t wait for the next. Write more soon!

Stormi

person JW
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22 - a little alarming that Minerva doesn\'t know of the upcoming Draco plan, since she and other Order members should be prepared to be called. I wonder why Albus doesn\'t have S&H observed at all times by Order members or Aurors, so that help would always be there under an Invisibility Cloak or behind a tree. Curious how Hermione will respond to Severus\' offer of the Thantos poison. Thanks for the new chapter!!