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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you write so well. The part where Severus prepares to leave, the testament, the owlery You can feel the sadness in every line. And then you go on to be funny when they each prepare for their followup teacher in their own way. Very very good. I love it. Not just the story but I am sure that whilst you are writing you are actually feeling the emotions yourself, I did as a reader, I cannot believe you could write this well otherwise.I really really like it
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How do you do it?! I just love it!!! Such wonderful writing, sweetie! I can never get enough of these two! I can well imagine Snape taking advantage (in a good, enjoyable way!) of a drunken Hermoine! And it\'s good to know that I have a common thread with Hermoine, for I, too, am a \"silly\" drunk! Ah, where is MY Snape during these times of lowered inhibitions? Not that I need lowered inhibitions to let Snape have his way with me! Please update soon with those delicious lemons you promised! Happy writing, mi chica! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Sloppy drunken kisses,
Killer K ;}
Sloppy drunken kisses,
Killer K ;}
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 25 - Shropshire Gardens? When is that scheduled for - after the picnic? Hermione and Severus should\'ve limited the itinerary so that the picnic was the only option. By the time they get to Shropshire Gardens (if it\'s after the picnic) they may be so tense that they\'ll make mistakes. Eeps! Poor Leaf Ear; too bad Draco doesn\'t throw him a sock or something. Ooh, you\'re good at drawing out the tension! Wicked....
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24 - nice surprise, to have Annadale be the witch golem from RoR. Stupid girl, to sell out S&H just for the promise of a shag. Oh well, I just hope Draco and his buddies also get \"something pretty horrible\" in future chapters. BTW, my fave line in this chapter: \"If this were to be his last night on earth, he intended to go out with a bang. And...\" Thanks for posting!
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemons! Lemons! Hoorah for lemons!
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man Annadale i hope you just owl him the itinerary ...i fell sooooooo sorry you ... in till next time later and i hope is will be soon in till then keep up the aweosme work later
angel
angel
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! WHat are Severus and Hermione going to do now? I can\'t wait to read more! Update again and soon!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lmao lmao lmao! That is hilarious. xD
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 23 - ack, not good! He hasn\'t told her about those black vials - she better not get so drunk that she drinks one. And Albus hasn\'t sent anyone there to watch over them? Goodbye traitorous barmaid.....
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im so looking forward to the next chapter after that one! Jeez that must have been hard for Severus to restrain himself!