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for #4 ~ The \"Up Against the Wall\" Wars

by Ms_Figg

person Anguloce
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, Snape in such a romantic place...I\'m surprised he hasn\'t hexed everyone to pieces yet. keep writing, I can\'t wait for Draco to get his ass kicked!
person ancientgirl
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Draco\'s stupidity, and yay for Leaf ear!
person angel
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~draco you can be soooooooo stupidat times and yeaaa for leaf ear im glad he is free and i hope the elf help out ... and that snape takes in leaf ear ... man please update soon and in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person firewall
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaacccckkkk! why didn\'t they wait until the promised help arrived!!! How could you STOP there? Please, pretty please post more tonight! I can\'t wait. whimper
person DawnEB
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is nearly over, and yet again I waver between wanting more and seeing a plotline tied up in seemly manner. Hope those house elves are at their most vicious!
person Holly
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Go house-elves. Ahh! They\'re so cute. It would be cool if they saved the day. But I hope Snape doesn\'t die. *sob* P.S. Somehow my computer managed to foil my last review. *shakes fist* Sorry about that.
person Stormi
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27 - Severus is going to servive this little outing. I would expect him to become grumpier and grumpier. Onto the next chapter for me. Keep up the great work.
person Diane
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there.
Thanks for your stories, I like them a lot !!!
I\'m just writing to tell you the only error I\'ve met in this story.
The name of the bringer of Death in greak mythology is Thanatos and not Thantos as you wrote.
His twin brother controlling Sleep is Hypnos.
I suppose it\'s no great mistake you made but I quite focus on mythological errors.
Well there it\'s just typographic, so nothing to say.
Well, thanks for all again and I\'m waiting for the end of your story !!!
Bye
person Stormi
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28 - Ooohhh, what a place to leave us. Hurry, please hurry, so that I can get some sleep. Keep up the great work!
person anya
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no! You can\'t leave it there...
Update! Soon! Please!
(...er, if they live that is...)