rate_review Reviews

I love the wording of the dream sequence... the phrasing and the imagery is very well done. And they kissed!!! So that made me happy. *grin* There are a couple of grammar things in here, nothing a beta can\'t fix, but enough that I notice them. Oh, and tense confusion... I think it\'s in their thought processes, but everything gets a little confused. you might consider italicising their thoughts, or putting them in single quotations. Sorry, I think I might be just a *little* obsessive... anyway, other than that, I still love it! The tickling/stink scene had me giggling to myself. Anyway, I\'m off to read more... thank you!

I finished it! I was ever so sad when I saw there wasn\'t a next chapter button... but I expect you\'ll fix that eventually, so all\'s good. If you have an update email list would you add me to it? I definitely like this, although the smoking/language thing still surprises me... Malfoy is very easy to believe (gotta love him), but Hermione just doesn\'t seem to fit. Maybe justify her change a little? Just a thought. I liked the scene with Ginny, and Malfoy smelling seems to be a recurring theme... and it always makes me laugh. Anyway, this review is becoming ridiculously long so I\'ll stop singing your praises. Excellent chapter, excellent story! Thank you.

LOL good way to end that chap. Please contine soon! Lol who would have tought the prince of slytherin farts lololololololololololololol

Oh my...your story is so wonderfully written and absolutely breath taking intense that I just about died when there wasn\'t a \"next chapter\' at the bottom. Your writing style is so enjoyable to read and their dialogue sounds so dead on. Draco\'s words to her were just heart breaking. Cannot wait for more.

Great new chapter. Cant wait to see wat happens between them next!

Shivers going down my spine...can\'t wait to read more!!!! I love your story... I love the inner turmoil...I love the conflists! Keep writing! Please!!!

GOD.... what a great chapter... i hope hermione let\'s him in....

i LovE your new Chapters. It is so nicely done. I loved The crazy cat lady part too.

I love it! Keep going, cuz this story kix ass...that and the fact that I fully admire the fact that you made them smokers. :D It\'s about time we were admitted back into society and not ostracized b/c of that lung cancer crap... lol. :D
Kudos to you.

Nothing like a good smoke to clear your mind, eh? You know, I have found, some of the best conversations I\'ve ever had with people occurred on a smoke break. Anyways, I love your story and I absolutely love your style. Your story flows unlike some I\'ve read that are really choppy. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Your loyal reader,

Princess_Malfoy