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person sarabee
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow i love what you have done with your story! It was Great!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please update soon!
person Petalsoft
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the way you stuck with Draco\'s feelings in this chapter. It\'s nice to see that side of him. I was captivated.
person jchaser
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is just incredible and this chapter was just mind blowing. Loved Draco\'s kiss to the sleeping Hermione. Was so achingly sweet. And their first time was wonderfully written...hot, romantic and just great. Thanks for such an enjoyable read.
person KawaiiRyu
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, sex! This story is very well written, and I can\'t wait to see where it goes!
person moonjameskitten
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God ! How haven\'t I found you before ? How have\'nt I read your amazing story ! This was an incredibly great story to read ! I love you style - very true and animated - the way you write Draco and Hermione\'s characterizations ! As a true Dramione, that was EXACTELY what I was looking for ! Instinctive passion, passionate and growing relationship between them, recognation and knowlegdgement of both of their feelings ! Admirable ! Refreshing ! Please, keep on writing that fantastic fiction, cause, I need my tender and sweet and teasing Draco and I need my fragile, out-of-control and vulnerable Hermione !

I am fan. Really, I am.

Moonie
xxxx

Ps : I want to nominate your story at the \'Dangerous Liaisons awards site\'. would you mind if I do so ?
person cruttan
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I have been seeing this pop up for awhile but haven\'t had a chance to read until today and I\'m really glad I did! I see that you, like myself, are a fan of Crookshanks, which I applaud of course. I like that Draco was calling her baby in the last chapter- it makes him seem even sexier, if that\'s possible.

I am really looking forward to the rest of this.

Catherine
person cruttan
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add that the farting conversation cracked me up! Very original- never would have pictured that for Draco, which is what makes it so funny!
person HiddenAllusion
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good grammar! I\'m already swooning... not being able to read stories because of bad grammar drives me absolutely crazy, so I\'m very pleased with this! I like the story and the way you\'re developing it, although Hermione seems a little out of character. I really can\'t imagine her smoking and swearing quite as much as she does... will there be justification for it later? Haha... and I\'ve just realised that there are another four chapters to go, so I\'ll shut up for now and review later. Excellent beginning!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I needed a good laugh and something to lighten my heart some, and thank you for providing it. I can\'t wait for the update, and more info into Hermione\'s dreams, and what Draco saw.