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person lilycat
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot! The human sacrifice! Yowsa... What a deliciously dark turn of events. Sounds ominous but VERY promising- lots of potential there. (pictures Hermione strung up in skimpy clothing surrounded by evil, leering death eaters before Draco swoops in Zorro-style and rescues her)

Erm. Sorry about that. Got a little carried away. :) Seriously, I can\'t wait to read how this unfolds because it sounds totally amazing!
person moonjameskitten
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww !! I love Draco saying \'baby\' ! and keep on reading again and again ! this is so ...sweet from his mouth ! Totally fits Hermione ! Again, I can only say that this story is really SEXY, and then, you put some \'danger\' ... so it is SEXIER !! You can guess that I really CAN\'T WAIT for the next chaptersssss to come ??

Feeling warm when reading such tenderness and love between Draco and Hermione. Keep on writing, please ?

Moonie
xxx
person Evil Turtle
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ALllright New chap. Nicely done dutch over
person Jessi
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I love this Hermione. I lived in England for three years and I think that more kids that age smoke than not and I probably would too if I was under the pressure that she was (and if it did not make me nauseous.) I think that you could make Draco a little tougher without him being a git in the process. Draco is Power HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story, update soon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did! I radically enjoyes it.
I\'m so glad to see an update. This is one of my favorite stories so I was totally psyched to see your new installment.
Thanks! That made my night.
person hunidew
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is absolutly beaytifull. You capture an true outlook of lie. You can always consider someone elses opinions but never forget your own for those are the ones that truly matter. Keep writing with all your hearts content.
person moonjameskitten
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww ! what a great chapter ! I can\'t wait to read what\'s going to happen ! \'human sacrifice\' !? wow ! And I love the growing up relationship between Draco and Hermione ! Tender, hilarious, hot ! what a mixture ! Keep on writing, please !!

Moonie
xxx
person hunidew
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is absolutly beautiful. You capture an outlook of life that is truly real. Just remeber that you can always consider someone elses opinions but never forget your own for they are the ones that truly matter. keep writing with all your hearts content.
person Stacy
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this new chapter. I can\'t wait to read the next one!