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person DawnEB
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it woman, if this is Snape at his most twisted, I hope Hermione flattens him when she finds out. I can see how he might need incontravertable proof that she wants and needs only him before he finally gives himselve over to her, but I can\'t see her letting him get away with all that.
person angel
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great and im glad he told her he loved her ..... in cant wait in till i read other one of your storys well in till then keep up the great work and later

angel
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story. story is a little more evil since the last story but good. i seriously think that the deatheater who took hermione is actually severus. and decieded to test her on her loyalty.
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still wanted it to be Lucius.He\'s so hot. Could you resurrect him, like Volders in the Goblet of fire, just to add sex-worship value?
person JTBJAB
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAH! I was right! It was Severus! And yay, he told her he loved her!!!!! Giggles!
person Scully_m_
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredible as always... very bad Severus!
person firewall
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe....: )
person Joyous
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs* I love your stories, and hate to see them end... But, I do like the way you end them... like I\'ve said before, you have a wonderful way with words... I hope to read more from you soon.
person JW
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - ah, you big tease!! You had me all twisted in knots trying to figure out if it was Severus or someone else. Thank you for letting it be Severus, and for getting both of them to deal with their stuff but in a sneaky way. Now since they play that \"game\" later on, does he ever confess to her that this was him? More, more - we have to keep you chained to your keyboard!!
person yulia
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absalutly fantastic, i love your fic. always very creative, update quick i cant wait for more xxxxxxxx