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person Linda
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love how you\'re building this relationship, story by story. Good writing!
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Claps* Very very good. I think the way you think ^_^
person Snapelover11
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! A little painful emotionaly on poor Hermione. What a terrible position to be in! I guessed it was him, but knowing you, it could have been anyone! But he loves her...*sighs*. Thanks so much for writing that piece. It helps those of us who are shedding our own tears of goodbye for your stories. Love to read about love afterall! As always Ms_Figg....you are the queen.
person Hope
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh, next chapter. If you keep me in suspense much longer I will do something drastic like eat a pint of ice cream.
person ancientgirl
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, at first I thought it was Lucius, but then remembered your mention at the end of the sequel about their little games. Then came the quesions and I realized it was Severus. I felt that the way you had written him would make him unsure about how she could truly love him, and being the Slytherin he is, I think this was the best way for him to find out for sure how deep her love could be.

Great work.
person Addict
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just keep getting better and better...well done. Please keep writing!
person Zoltaire the Inscrutable
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful ending! Stupendous! Fabulous! Made me almost think about crying. Soooo glad you preserved dear Severus\' snarkiness throughout the \'declaring love\' part. Great job! Taa!

Zoltaire the Inscrutable
person JW
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - (reader feels woozy .... ) Who IS this Death Eater?!?!?! Where the blazes is the real Severus!
person beeky63
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT!!!!! LOL! That was utterly fantastic. What is the next story going to be? When is the next story coming? Can\'t wait.
Toodles.
person Catpower
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeek! The bastard! I hope he never tells Hermione it was him in the shrieking shack. Great writing, as ever but - that man is mean!