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person Persy
schedule September 3, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Very, very nice....

person Anon
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person neelix
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NICE!!!

I so knew it was Severus though... hehe, he's really good at being bad!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh He is soooo evil. I love you. You are my favorite author on here and I am working my way through your fics one by one and loving it.
person Chavela
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Well what a way to get out that you love someone. ONly Severus would kidnap and scare his lover. It was wonderful!
person Ms_Figg
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've never met a man with a 5 - 6 inch organ (thank goodness) I think that is like...a world averge. The length I give here is fantasy, but I've seen pornos with guys that had to be a good foot long. They were mostly black men but there were a few very well hung white guys as well...huge. Actually I had cut Severus down a bit, to about 10 inches. Unfortunately, I think the edit didn't make it here. I'll go over it later. But remember, fantasy.
person ....
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person ...
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very surprising ending. I liked it a lot lol :)
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus is so twisted.
Gotta love him the little pumpkin.