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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I feel like a smoke after all that! This is very well written. I like how you\'re changing it up so that it\'s not just the same old S&M stuff that everyone writes about. I look forward to more chapters.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice set up for a story. good character work.
perhaps a little unlikely that dumbledore would suggest something that smutty,
but overall a good read, -can\'t wait till the next chapter.
perhaps a little unlikely that dumbledore would suggest something that smutty,
but overall a good read, -can\'t wait till the next chapter.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is EXACTLY how \'my\' version of Snape is like. Very tightly controlled, but with a lot of pent up energy/passion/anger/etc. that he\'d love to be able to release, to show someone, but he can\'t. Wow. You have hit the nail on the head with this character portrayal and this story sounds very promising. I can\'t wait to read what you envision as his perfect \'requirement\'!