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for Who Killed Ronald Weasley?

by TheHogwartsPlayers

person scully
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it! love the format you are using with interviews, notes and newspaper articles. it is cool having a group of authors (im assuming its a group, not that you are schitzo, haha!) as well and doesnt detract from the story. interesting point of view shift for the interview with hermoine. wonder if all interviews will be from the pov of the interviewee. that would be interesting. will we be getting some sex scenes soon--either present scene or as a flashback? those could be very interesting considering the relationships among the cast of suspects! looking forward to future chapters!
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is really good so far, the first four chapters are funny, suspenseful and entralling. Cant wait for more!
person lilith
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I first read this story, it reminded me of \'murder on the orient express\'. Its a very old film, so perhaps you don\'t know it, but I hope your story continues to be as interesting as this film is! In the tradition of orient express I think that ALL suspects killed Ron, either together or one at a time. If that isn\'t the case, it is Neville for shure. I think Ron poisioned his girlfriend, the hemlock... and, last but not least, the murderer is always the gardener after all... ;-)
person June
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 - well, speed users have died from overdose, but Ron could\'ve died from the strangulation, or hemlock, or who knows what. I\'m looking forward to the Hermione interview next!
person Arnettra
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am most intrigued! I like the style you\'ve chosen to go with; I really do feel as if I\'m reading the Daily Prophet getting news of this salacious story. Although Ron is my favorite character, it\'s an odd thrill to see him sullied up a bit. Please continue.
person cannonfodder
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like it. What happens next
person cannonfodder
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really original, I am pleasantly suprised by this. Well done all involved.
person cannonfodder
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I definitely want to read the rest, this is just what I needed to read for a change.
person ann
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of this. How many chapters will there be? How many authors, and did you all take part in each stage of creation. Very interesting, update soon.
person ann
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definately a new one on me, I bet that a lot of people wont get what you are trying to do, perhapos a spoiler in each chapter may be a good thing. keep going tho. Anne marie