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Ch 8 - Molly needs to have her emotions under better control. If the Aurors bring in a Legilimens, she\'s in trouble! Thanks for updating.

Great story. Please keep going. I want to know who killed him too.

umm...what is No. 13? some kind of rat poison you can buy? that bit is confusing. and maybe you should indicate that basher (or someone) took earlier statements from Molly because her questions don\'t make sense otherwise. you could just have basher say \"i will be asking you to explain more about your earlier statements and asking you some new questions.\" that way the audience will assume all her references to \"you stated that...\" (when molly had made no statement yet) and \"on 30 oct ...\" (when molly never said the date she saw Ron was 30 Oct). what about molly\'s knife? i guess basher will ask her about it later??
just suggestions for you. :) it was a good chap, can\'t wait to read harry\'s interrogation. :)

This is a great fic. It kept my intrest.

The chapter was great

I love this, It completely captures Lucius. well done madame author.

I didn\'t really like this chapter as much as the others. I think that it\'s because of the POV. Seeing the story through the eyes of an original character (Boadicea Basher) gave it a more detached feel, which I liked. All of the canon characters are OOC, but that\'s ok because it\'s how the story is (if that makes sense?). But seeing it through the eyes of an OOC canon character doesn\'t seem right to me. I\'m also not a big fan of the first person narrative. I know two of the previous chapter used first person, but I didn\'t seem to mind as much because it still felt kind of detached with the OC. I definitely prefer third person, though. I also liked reading the different reports and Daily Prophet articles in the previous chapters. The story overall is an interesting idea. I\'m wondering whether we won\'t know anything about who did it until the end of the story when the killer (or killers) is revealed, or will the number of suspects decrease as the story goes along until only a couple are left.

The chapter was great

This is the first story I\'ve read in full and I\'m laughing my ass off! The snarky tone is perfect, I have no clue as to whodunnit and am looking forward to future chapters.

Ch 5 - when Hermione says \"I