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for Angelic

by penancez

person Elvira
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude that was brutal. I liked it though. Poor girl. Haveing to go through all that.
person PhoenixAngel
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sad fic. But I liked it. I usually tend to read fics with happy endings, I dont mind dark or angst though.
Keep up the good work.


ROXY
person MidnightShade3
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark. Angsty. Beautiful.
person DarkMarron
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... heavy... good story but oh sooooooooooo dark...
person Tamura
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eep. that was gruesome. i can imagine Severus being a second, or rather third, dark lord. i\'m reading one where Lucius is in almost the same exact position as Sev. I liked it, even with the death at the end. I assume that\'s what happened after she slid off the rail anyways
person Kat Potter
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aawww how sad. Mean old snapie. grrrrrr
person fragonknight01
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was totally chilling, yet so believeable.
person PM Honey
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was really powerfully written. Your work uses emotion very well. So very sad but still I like it!
person penny
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! this story is freakin awesome. Who wrote this masterful piece of work?! Oh wait I did. . . I know. Kinda sad when an author reviews there own stuff. *Sad sigh*
person fw
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was so amazing! I\'ve never seen anything like this at all. Excellent work. You can just feel the emotions going on through the eyes of the little girl. And Harry is always silent as a last ditch effort at hurting Snape, but apparently can yell and scream too where his daughter is concerned. I wonder how they would react to find her dead? That\'s something to imagine right there.