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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy reading this chapter very much. Wow, I did think they really were together. That was a very good throw off. Can\'t wait to read the next chapter.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I very much like this story. I am a natural Harry/Ginny shipper and they will be together in the end no matter what, but I do enjoy reading this story. Please Update soon
Love and Kisses
Sammie Curls
Love and Kisses
Sammie Curls
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story a lot, keep writing, please!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I want you to continue...just waiting for the sex you promised in the summary. It IS chapter 4 already.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! Its so hard to find a story that is relatively free from gramatical errors, that it is just such a relief to click on one and find it nearly perfect. And the story itself, wow. I am indeed enjoying it. This diabolical scheme . . . it seems so complicated and yet . . . so simple! Almost makes me wonder why Vol- I mean, YOU-KNOW-WHO didn\'t try doing something similar before.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
From what little I actually read of this story it does seem intresting, please continue writing it. What I read was after Harry got out of the shower, something that actually could happen.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you don\'t scrap this story, as it has wonderful possibilities. Jealous, feral Harry plotting to claim Hermione is quite believeably written - though I think whatever potion it was was working on shwatever was already there, perhaps as seen by Snape when he rummaged around in Harry\'s mind - and I look forward to seeing how Hermione reacts to his machinations. (Poor dear, I don\'t think she stands a chance of not giving in.) And have I mentioned how nice it is to read a story that actually pays attention to grammar and proper punctuation and word use!?! Thank you!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent beginning to what promises to be a fascinating story. I suppose the potion on the shiv is a lust potion, or the like. Maybe one intended to lower Harry\'s inhibitions to the point he actually does something to Hermione (Read: rape!). This would definately lead to his demise either by his own hand (most likely) or that of his friends. Please continue this. I really would love to read more. in fact, it\'s going onto my list fo favorites. Alorkin
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh!! This is so good. I\'m not a Harry Potter or a het fan, but I love this. Please continue! :-)
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this fic is going really well. This is one of the first times i\'ve ever read an unfinished fic. :P They can never ever update fast enough for me. Ahhh this is killin me, I\'ve gotta know what happens. Please Please Please update, even if nobody else reads it i promise to rate every single chapter. *sad puppy eyes* please don\'t stop.