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for Biding My Time: Our Way

by watchyerback

person rubberduck
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is a great story. it was such an ingenious and nefarious plan snape came up with. it looks like there is no way out for harry. even if hermione gives in, there will still be harry's conscience to deal with. i figured hermione would come to this conclusion and suggest it. i didn't think of the fact that harry still might not be able to live with himself after. i'm very curious as to how you will get the trio to live happily ever after. i seriously hope that's what's going to happen. it would be depressing if they don't. and the end of the sixth book was depressing enough, thank you very much lol. i can't wait for the next update.
person Avanell
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll have to see what I wrote last time...but I know that I still believe this could be an awesome trio-ship. I mean, the idea of Ron sharing and Hermione giving to Harry would be sooo hot! Regardless, I just KNEW Hermione would come to this idea. Tonks brought up a good point, let's see how Hermione will deal with it. She should have mentioned how she reacted, however. OH, I just hope Ron doesn't lose Hermione! Maybe that's why I want them all together...so she can have both. That would make this a most awesome trio. There was another story where Harry did something similar, and in that one it made sense for him to steal her away from Ron.

Oh, please update soon! I was like one or two WHAT! Not weeks...days please! I have been so anticipating this chapter I've double checked to see if i missed it...last time I checked was last night. you rock! You're such an awesome writer!

Um...can this count for like THREE reviews :)
person tabitoo
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...Im really missing this story. I know you have a life and are probably very busy at the moment. Just please I beg of you to continue with this story. I still think it's the best one at this site. You are an increadible writer. Hope you are able to post soon. Thanks :)
person Spectator Beholder
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Just read your story from beginning to end (or at least were it ends for now) and I\'m impressed! Those dream episodes were especially well-done and that\'s a fact! *big grin*. Not a bad plot either! But really, what a dastardly plan it was that Snape/Voldemort hatched here! O_o. It\'ll be interesting to see how the trio will deal with this and what can be done to save Harry. I did expect Ron to be a _little_ bit more understanding than he has been so far thorugh, while he hasn\'t been under such a spell/portion as Harry, he has been under a love-portion, so he if anyone shoudl understand some of Harry\'s current agony... When I began reading your story, I didn\'t have very high excpeations, but after reading it, I sure do now and will look forward to coming chapters!! Ganbatte!

\"I dance the dance of the fool
And pray you find me mad
For if you lay hands upon the root
You\'ll know me, without illusion
And find me guilty of the truth.\"
person tabitoo
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... two chapters or six???? Are you kidding, I never want this story to end!!! This chapter was great, I love the way Ron is getting jealous and wondering about what actually happened. It\'s so something Ron would do. Do as you will, this is your story, I\'m just along for the ride, and an awsome ride it is. Though, however it ends, I hope the three of them can still remain friends. I think their friendship is strong enough to handle just about anything, at least I hope. Thank you so much for the update, I was getting worried. As long as you finish this story, I\'m sure it will be great whatever you decide to do. You\'re a great writer. By the way the pensive scene was &*%!!!! I think if I were Hermione I would also want Harry to keep that dream... I mean memory...yeah memory, LOL!!!
person Avanell
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I nearly DIED when the chapter ended! I want to know what Hermione is suspicious of...what is goin on in her fast-working brain? What does she think about that missing hour of time? And what would happen if she touched the jewelry while with Ron? I hope her feelings are jsut as strong (or stronger?) for Ron. This would make a threesome sooo hot, but I\'m greedy. I want it all for Hermione\'s sake (don\'t like the boys sneaking off together without her, and stuff).

Love it! Please update sooner!
person Waiting
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiting desperately for a new chapter...this is a phenomenal story!
person claudia
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great fic! The concepts are great, the dream sequences tricked me! Looking forward to each update!
person Sea
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting plot! Keep up the good work!
person Rache
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That really hurt. I got this weird expression on my face while reading that chapter. It hurt to hear the explanation and the almost outcome of the incident. They may not get passed this but Harry deserves both punishment and forgiveness. It\'s not his fault if he has feelings for Hermione. He kept it buried in him but because of the arse Voldemort everything is out in the open and now he\'s trying to kill himself!!! I can\'t think of any punishment either because I really feel sorry for Harry and what he\'s feeling as of now. I just hope everything works out. Still rooting for Harry and Hermione to get things right.

Hmm.... smut... Who\'s smut? lol