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Oh man i really like your story.  You have to update,  please finish this story.  I know you probably left out due to lack of reviews but we can be lazy. I hope you continue this and the other version. 

Thanks

Very interesting story. Pretty well written. I hhope you come back and finish it sometime.

I was really intrigued by your story, and was really enjoying it. I saw that you said it was also posted somewhere else and when I saw where went over to see if you posted more. I was thrilled to see you had until I read it. Why did you have to go the usual route and turn Ron into the bad guy just to make Harry and Hermione viable? I mean come on! That's no where how he was acting at the beginning of the story so why the complete turn around? Just to get to Harry and Hermione? There's no way he would ever had said that to her. And even if he had she can forgive Harry for trying to RAPE her but not Ron for getting upset when she tells him she wants to sleep with some other guy?

You copped out.

Evil cliffe.

one off topic question, could the sword of Griffindor(CoS) be the something of Griffindor or Ravenclaw?
is this just a plain Harry/Hermione if so why is it in the threesomes/moresomes sub-setion?

Oh my god. I can't believe it. This is just amazing. You capture the characters feelings so well, you make the readers feel them too. I love your story it's incredibly sad, but it gives people a glimpse of what a sad thing the human mind really is.
I must say I feel sorry for the whole golden trio
I can't wait to see what happens next
please update soon

Two different versions of the same story? Oh, I am going to love this...I like H/Hr and H/R/Hr. Please, carry on!

Of course you can pull it off.

Wonderful fic. but... it's H/Hr???... I hope not. I hate it!!!... H.Potter is about a trio, the will (H.P.), the brain (H.G.) and the heart (R.W.). (or the Hero and a couple of sidekicks... ;-)) In most H/Hr fics. it`s only a couple and... something... a clow, a monster, a stupid... Ron is always throw away. A couple is much less interesting than a trio... !!!!... it's late!!!!... I must go!!!

please keep writting...

I would really like to see more of this. Its interesting, and there are enough plausible directions this could take to hold my attention.