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for Beloved

by serpentlady

schedule December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was sad. Poor Harry. I wonder who it was.....
xoxo,
kitkat
person Kalira
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was just beautifully sad and emotional and I think it was made better by the fact that you never actually came out and said who it was that 'He' was, more cleanly emotional, not influenced so much by preconceived notions. I personally was thinking of Severus as I read. When I first started I thought maybe Draco, but only for about a paragraph.

Kalira
person bianca
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is so sadddd. talk about heart ache. Whose his beloved. Draco?
person serpentlady- Author of this Story
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For those of you who desperately want to know who I had in mind when I wrote this:

I was thinking of either Severus Snape or Remus Lupin, but Snape more so. However, the point of this story was to leave Him open to interpretation, so that you, the reader, could plant whomever you want in there. With the sixth book out, you could even stick Dumbledore in there if you swing that way *shudders*

Thx for the reviews.

schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who exactly was his beloved? I\'ve heard of leaving people in suspense....but this is killing me! I can\'t make out who it is.....

I love the story it was well written and sweet,

who was his beloved though?
person NightShade
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sad. I saw Severus as Him, but can imagine Lucius too... Nice work.
person pluro china
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
of course we have to review!!! i want to know who harry\'s \"beloved\" is!!!!! waaaah!!!! make another chapter as soon as possible!!!!! also, this is an awesome story!!!! good job ^_^