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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo i bet they change their minds
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who does Pansy want Harry to introduce her too? Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 4!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!! OoooooooooOOooooooooohhhhh I cant wait for the ball! does pansy like Hermione? what is blaise going to do about ron, and out of curiousity is hermione going to be the fairy god mother or are plaining to split that part up? Just Damn that was A good chappie.
cant wait for the next one!
peaches
cant wait for the next one!
peaches
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh em gee im luvin it keep the updates coming PLEEZ!!!!
*mwah*
niamh
*mwah*
niamh
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry! I can\'t wait for chapter 5!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i do hope you update soon.... i truely do..
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon!!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is crap. Complete and total, unoriginal, rehashed crap.
Have I got your attention? Good. Keep reading, you might get something out of it.
Your use of colloquial language combined with the pastoral autocratic setting is bloody infuriating. The \"aww man!\" in your dialogue is what eventually made me hit the back button. This is a BAD thing! You shouldn
Have I got your attention? Good. Keep reading, you might get something out of it.
Your use of colloquial language combined with the pastoral autocratic setting is bloody infuriating. The \"aww man!\" in your dialogue is what eventually made me hit the back button. This is a BAD thing! You shouldn
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* See? Even I am not infallible. My hint was supposed to be (Harry Potter + beta readers). I know that the fictionalley.org community has a sound forum for young (and old!) writers of HP fiction, and there is likely someone there that can assist you. Work at it! You never know what might come out of this story with a bit more time and a lot more patience. ~Cheers.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. Hmm I wonder who Pansy is interested in? I wonder how the other party will react to that. And I\'m anxious to see Harry and Draco\'s next meeting. Can\'t wait to read the next update. Good Job.