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for CinderHarry

by MarsInsane

schedule December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved!!!
person Missi
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this-it was so cute! in your other fairy-Harry-tale you were asking about an epilogue for this. It\'s at a good stopping point but a one-shot of their anniversary or OOHHH-Pansy and Mione\'s wedding, with Draco and Harry recreating their wedding night afterwards or something. But it\'s not necessary, just fun to think about.
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I didn\'t want this to end!
person Storm
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a great ending. I had a smile on my face for almost the entire last chapter. I also really loved the \'such a great story to tell children\' line. It was really funny and the whole Severus not happy about Sirius hounding him but still a good day line at the end was cute. Great job and I can\'t wait to read your next story. How about Umbridge as an evil witch? She was pretty nasty in my opinion. And you could always turn somebody evil...I mean personally I think Trelawney would be hilarious as an Igor-esque servant to the evil witch or wizard. And I could definitely see Aunt Marge as being an evil witch, you could always just give her some powers, even if you wanted to not just give it to her, you could have her make a deal with someone to get more power and such and such. But can\'t wait for your next story. Oh and you could always do an epilogue chapter (wink;)wink;))to this one maybe about Harry being pregnant and the birth of the next prince or even twins. I personally think it would be hilarious to have Harry yelling at Draco or punching him again when he\'s in contractions or in a mood swing. Good luck on your next story.
person fragonknight01
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just too cute. loved it.
person Yana
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story i loved it
person Jenna
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think u should make a wedding night
person LadyX
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And they all pretty much lived happily ever after-
I liked that bit. It made me smile. Theo should have died. I expected him to do something like that though. I look forward to reading more stuff by you.
person XaloneXalwaysX
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cuteness! Update! ^-^
person you\'ll never know!
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!!!!!!!!!i LUURRVEE this story!