rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hi thanx for everyones reviews i apologise for lack of editing i will hopefully find someone in time, at the moment these stories are simple musing nothing too serious thanx again and keeps reviewing.

very interesting story concept, i shall keep reading,lol. Voted for the ppl by the ppl!

The best story lines in the world cannot survive bad mechanics (i.e. grammar, spelling, form). I would most strongly suggest that you go over your work with a fine tooth comb, or ask someone to edit it for you. You will find more people willing to read your stories if they do not have to struggle in reading it.

I am by no means trying to be discouraging. Indeed, I feel that by telling you that I found your story absolutely perfect, I would be of no help whatsoever to you. I do hope you continue, you just need to work at it a bit more.

Hey your fics are amazing please keep reading i love the stories youve started writing, totally awesome im snape struck lol.

I\'m wondering where Hermione is going to come into this.

Really good keep it up! Very interesting a young Snape hmmmm? lol

I\'m sure this might turn out to be a great story, but at this point it needs some heavy editing. Good luck!!