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for How the War Was Lost

by Helbling

person loralee1
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My sis sent me the link to this with a squick alert lol had to check it out. Can definatly say this was the most squicky pairing i\'ve seen in a while thanks.
person June
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very funny! You could\'ve used Filch\'s beloved manacles and whips as \"props,\" but this was definitely enough \"detail.\" What a twisted sister you have! Adding Mrs Norris was over the top. If you have another chapter, you could have Moody send Voldemort the Pensieve memory (or a NEW memory from the Caribbean), and have Voldy and his Death Eaters go insane. Then someone like clumsy Neville breaks the Pensieve, breaking the cycle of insanity. (giggle.... just trying to make you write more squick!)
person Chloe the Grey
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* That poor, poor cat ;_;
person Bambu
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was decidedly squicky and nightmarish enough. Filch and Moody... decidedly the most nasty couple.
person Tourniquet
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock my socks off, you do. ;-*
person Lutra
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*rolling around laughing* Eeeeuuuw! The self-inflicted wounds to her eyes should\'ve warned me.
Nice one : )
person lovethelab
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just like a train wreck - I read the warning, but had to look anyway! Oh my eyes! Hope to have this blinding problem out of my system to read you next story! LOL