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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This really is a very good fic! Your doing much better than me when I started out! :) Don\'t flip straight to the sex just yet. I like where your plot is going and I can\'t wait to see the students reactions to her teaching there. Your writing flows well and I love how your writing the characters! Keep up the good work! I\'ll be keeping an eye on this one. :)
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice interaction between our two protagonists as the sparks begin to fly...
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I am glad that it wasn\'t really Hermione in the magazine though. No matter how \"wild\" she might have gotten her seventh year, I can\'t imagine her making that leap. So sad about Neville and his grandmother. Great launching pad for a story. Update soon. :)
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cool. I hope you update soon! ^_~
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still get the feeling it really was her, but we shall see. I\'m curious as to who did that to Neville.
Looking forward to more.
Looking forward to more.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man ...i like it keep up the good work and please update soon in till then later
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has a great start! I can wait to read more, update soon, please!!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I love the fact that Hermione is implied as having a rebellious streek. It\'s hard to find a fic that has Hermione acting other than her book-worm self or someone who is utterly shy.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice first chapter. Can\'t wait until Hermione shows up at Hogwarts (evil snicker). Methinks poor Sev won\'t know what hit him!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, please post again soon. Thanks.