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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amusing - extremely amusing - please update!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great beginning onto the next chapter
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ yes yes yes it is going to be an every every every long year for them i cant wait in till you update again i just love it and in till next time love peace and fan fics ... later
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good start you have there. I hope to be reading more soon..they say anger is a form of passion...keep up they good work.... hope you post often...please dont leave us hanging...
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this looks to be quite fun. I can\'t wait to see what you do next!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe! Brilliant! Although i feel sorry about Neville!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story. I actually like the idea of it being Hermione in the centerfold. Hmm. Wonder what her tattoos are-any silver and green snakes? Keep an eye out for typos on the word That. I think you type faster with one hand than the other and that has lead to a couple of mistypes. Also, I noticed in chapter 1 defense was misspelled with a v. Keep with your plan to have this progress slowly or else any relationship will be unbelievable. Can\'t wait for more.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I\'m absolutely excited to read more. I love how she was like, pfft, wasn\'t me in your dirty magazine. Will we find out why her eyes change? Some sort of spell or something? Or is it just irrelevant fact that I\'m looking into too much?
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man poor neville and i fell sorry for mione she lots her friend and what or who is doing this ... i cant wait in till the next chapter please update soon and in till then keep up the great work and later for now
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice! Your first chapter caught my interest...it was a novel beginning and then you compounded it with your revelations in the second chapter. Poor Neville! I hope someone finds a cure. I hope you update soon; I\'m really anxious to read your next chapter.