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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He He He,
I Like it! Go on with the Story ^^
I Like it! Go on with the Story ^^
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! I love your writing style, and the plot is creative and surprising (in a good way.)
I think your note at the beginning of chapter five was great and very mature... it\'s great that you\'re not loosing your temper over one reveiwer who (as it seems) hasn\'t even read beyond chapter 1... I\'ve seen authors loosing their temper over positive reviews with friendly remarks about a reoccuring typo and stuff like that!
I\'m looking forward to you next chapter.
Keep up the great work!
I think your note at the beginning of chapter five was great and very mature... it\'s great that you\'re not loosing your temper over one reveiwer who (as it seems) hasn\'t even read beyond chapter 1... I\'ve seen authors loosing their temper over positive reviews with friendly remarks about a reoccuring typo and stuff like that!
I\'m looking forward to you next chapter.
Keep up the great work!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ ohhh hell no .... man he his soooooooooo gonig to kill her befor the end of the year ....i just love it .... i cant wait in till the next update please update sooon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later
angel
ps your opening paragraph was not over the top and i think no i hope the flamer get the point ~giggels~ in till then later
angel
ps your opening paragraph was not over the top and i think no i hope the flamer get the point ~giggels~ in till then later
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahaha! what a hoot! Carry on just the way you have been! You are doing a wonderful job.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That is truelly hilarious!! Although the phrase Suck it up seems very American to me, but, hey, it\'s your story and it\'s funny - so keep at it! AND..... Please update soon!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please enlighten me, why do so many people the need to make a highly intelligent woman like Hermione a scarlet woman, vamp, female Rambo or even a whore? This is just as ridiculous as Severus as a pansy.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am just finishing chapter 2 and I have to admit I am surprised! And that was in a good way. I really thought this story would be going in a different direction and you didn\'t take it there. Well done thus far...am on to chapters 3 and 4. Thanks :)
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha what a pair.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know you\'ve passed far beyong the realms of a normal family when you read this story to your mum, and she thinks it\'s hysterical...
but aside from that, *I* think its hysterical! wonderful work, my dear, absolutely thrilling!
I adore some of your one-line little jabs (par example:\"And she would [throw a tantrum], because she was fiery and passionate, but mostly she was impatient and enjoyed getting her own way.\" Or:
\"Hermione had bent to scratch her knee (which is ok when you have an itch, unless you\'re nearly naked.)\"), and your characterization is brilliant - just enough snark and humour.
and so: I\'m down on my knees,
I\'m begging you please!
To update soooooon!
lia
but aside from that, *I* think its hysterical! wonderful work, my dear, absolutely thrilling!
I adore some of your one-line little jabs (par example:\"And she would [throw a tantrum], because she was fiery and passionate, but mostly she was impatient and enjoyed getting her own way.\" Or:
\"Hermione had bent to scratch her knee (which is ok when you have an itch, unless you\'re nearly naked.)\"), and your characterization is brilliant - just enough snark and humour.
and so: I\'m down on my knees,
I\'m begging you please!
To update soooooon!
lia
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man its going to be a long year for them if they keep it up ~lol~ man i cant wait in till your next update and in till then keep up the great work and later for now
angel
angel