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son of bitch!!!!!!! how could he do that to her? gah it made me so angry. Anyway, great job so far. Keep up the good work.
Blessed Be,
Sandra

aww poor mione ... she was sooo close... well maybe next time ... please update soon i would love to read what will happen next ..in till next time keep up teh awesome work and later for now

angel

That bastard. She should kill him...after raping him in the dungeons.

what the hell!!!!!!!!!!! you better not have severus fuck that new woman

Just so ya\'ll know, it\'s hard for me to buy that Severus would all of a sudden forget about Hermione, too. Which is why, you may want to stick around and find out exactly who (and perhaps what) our new friend, little innocent Ana, really is. Kinda weird that she\'d show up right after all these revelations about Harry. Don\'t ya think?

Thanks for reading, and sorry about the long wait.

~ A.S.

WTF? A new character thrown into the mix...Severus instantly forgetting Hermione. Doesn\'t work for me.

Ah the plot thickens. Update soon.

I really like the way you have portrayed Hermoine, I find myself recognizing myself in some of her actions (sevvie bear etc that is so something I would do if someone really pissed me off)

As a woman who is intelligent and comfortable with her own sexuality I do like seeing a heroine portrayed as such, however I do find having them return to thier school days on thier first sexual encounter almost demeaning for Hermoine, as if she is no longer in charge. I could see them having sex as equals, and later enacting Professor/student when they are more comfortable with each other. I just think Snape for all his snarkiness is actually honourable, and would find lusting after a student most reprehensible.

Over all it is a great story, please keep writing.

Thanks for the entertainment
Wrenn

Wow - Severus in Hermione\'s jeans - damn if only I could draw! Hilarious - absolutely hilarious!

i love it please more more i just cant wait sooooooo keep up the awesome work amd in till next time later for now

angel