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for Centerfold

by CynthiaAnastasia

person Anon
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More Please!
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Redlightspin
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
da. da.... da... dumm....
person Nashuna
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Decent until the Mary Sue.... then I was just turned off. But my inner english teacher commends you on your writing non-withstanding.
person bellakuuipo
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is turning out. Poor Hermione and that jerk Snape. I hope things turn out better in your future update.
person Karlee
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Absoloutely spectacular. It\'s hard to find an adult fanfic nowadays that\'s not pointless smut, but you definitely pulled it off. Also, i don\'t think i\'ve ever laughed that hard in my life. My stomach hurts! Now, keep writing! Thats an ORDER! I\'m gonna \'splode if something doesn\'t happen here.

person Beltane
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell! Why not bring her a pair of diamond studded puppy shoes?
I haven\'t laughed so hard at a SSHG fic in years. This is hilarious. Im going to be kicked off the computer for laughing so hard while I\'m supposed to be studying. I love the whole concept of Hermione appearing as a centerfold, and I\'m so glad you made Hermione a strong personality rather then, for instance, having her moon over Ron or someone equally ridiculous. Underneath the canon Hermione\'s bookworm exterior there has to be a spine made of steel or she would have bowed to peer pressure long ago, and I think that\'s reflected in your story. I like how you didnt comprimise by making her either really smart or sexy.
I think that the comments about Hermione being a \'scarlet woman\' are uncalled for and unsupported, and congratulations on handling so well and using the facts.
Please update soon
person lilith
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arghh! Your story got invaded by a Mary Sue! I recently read a fic which said they are in fact ugly magical monsters in disguise, set on creating havoc... Voldemort recruited one of them to overtake Hogwarts... that\'s it, I\'m sure! *nods gravely*