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person Rayline_
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hardly disgusted, seeing as you\'re not the only author whose ever written this stuff. I quite liked it, and yes I agree with Harry though, Draco is one sick individual... that\'s what we like though xD
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NONONONO that was brilliant! Please do try that again, um yer me i hav some funny kinks which is why I\'m anon. Anyway I liked it and I can be hard to please so yeah, well done.

person ChasteBlush
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, you know i really dont know what to say, you could have made it slightly more erotic but yeah its cool, well done,
Trust me as much as it makes you blush, its probably really good so just keep writing and people will lvoe it, dont give up, you could make this a new kink for them, lol!

Update and i\'ll check back soon,

x x x
person Leclair
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My darling, dearest, you are far from being a sick individual. We all know that Draco has an alpha male complex and marking his territory in any and every way possible is fair game to him.

Ever seen Sex and the City? A politician asks Carrie if she will let him pee on her... unlike Harry, she says no and is utterly disgusted. Mind you, Harry never really said yes.

In other words, I think calling the fic \'hot and completely called for\' will suffice. Got any more fantasies for us?
person Gabe
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, it\'s not quite my cup of tea, but it was well written and even somwhat realistically how people bring new oddish kinks into bed. Good job! Esp. for writing something that many people get squicked over.
person IGGY
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hihihi....funny I have to say it wasn\'t bad at all. Kinda icky when you think about it, but hey everyone has their weird little fantasies. Great job none ther less!

Cheers!

~Pamela~
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry could have always called his bluff. He seemed to like it in the end. Either that or the constant rubbing.
person Anon...
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, please don\'t feel so bad about it. I am not into piss, but this actually wasn\'t too bad! (Scat would have been worser). It would great if you wrote a series of chapters hi-lighting all of Draco\'s so-called \"sick\" fantasies. *hopeful grin*. Neeways...good job!
person Alexa
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No point in worrying about it, it\'s already written and posted :-)
And, which is worse... it was good! ;-)
I liked the \"Lay back and take it\" part best. Alpha mail fantasies indeed.
person Swiftrunner
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never read any watersports fics, but I rather enjoyed the laugh. And yes, scat would have been much more...interesting to say.