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by Lenora

schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, story was good, but I would have appreciated a little more depth.

And naming the girl Marilee? *shudder* now that's abuse.
person trustingfriendship
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely fic; would like to see more flashbacks from it:-)
person HieiandKuramaLover
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
person fw
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! The beginning was perfect and so was the ending, though I do wish we\'d seen more into why and how Remus was obliviated. Did he know he was about to lose his memories? Was he angry about it, or at himself for marking Sev as being his? Oh well, they get together anyway, so it doesn\'t matter too much. Seeing Marilee as a teenager at the end was a nice add on too