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for The Last Turn

by What2Do

person Zorander
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person luna luck
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start...lots of potential. Please continue with the story!
person What_2_Do
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanx for the review luna i really want ppl to read and give me some info on what they think and what i may do to become better thanx again peace
person Narcissa Black
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. So does Hermione still have her baby?
person What_2_Do
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The reraders will find out in the next few chapters there will be a harry/hermione love scean then good/bad news which one your cant find out yet if you have an ideas on this FIC help me out i love mixing my writing with ppl and creating an awsome story



oh also thanx for the review Black
person What_2_Do
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank Gigi for the review you inspired me to con. writing this story i was about to give up 3 days no reviews i thought it was a lost hope so one again thank you very much

What2Do
person gigi
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very differnt. I like an unusal plot when it comes to this couple. Like to read more!!