schedule
September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this is very good there are a couple things you might want to clarify though like harry\'s basilisk.they kill with there eyes as much as Harry
schedule
September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much better with the smut man god ffn mad this story SUCK
schedule
September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I love your plot! It rocks, and I love dark Harry. However, it would really help if you got a beta or two. The errors in the text took away from the story line. I would really love to see more especially if it is edited.
MLF
I love your plot! It rocks, and I love dark Harry. However, it would really help if you got a beta or two. The errors in the text took away from the story line. I would really love to see more especially if it is edited.
MLF