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Yeah!!! He went to the room! You seriously had me holding my breathe there for a moment. Well, until my lungs burned and forced me to breathe. But I swear, if it hadn\'t been for that biological necessity, I would have suffocated with anticipation!

I bow down before the mistress of cliffhangers.......

This is a very interesting twist, one that had me drawing in a breathe.

You know a story is good when it is constantly screwing with your respiratory system.

Your descriptions are so delicate and yet hold such intensity. It as if each word were meant to resemble the deafening screams that emitt endlessly from his parched lips. I can see him there, huddle close to the warm body of his secret desire. How truly painul an image, yet endearing in ways I cannot begin to describe.

I don\'t think I have ever seen Albus portrayed that way. It is an interesting, and a little creepy. Yet, this is something I think should be mentioned. He is afterall a male, a no matter how old he is, he still has to have some sort of urges. So I applaud, with some shame, your originality.

Great updates, dearie! I really enjoyed the makeout sessions- except for the Albus part! Sorry, it was great writing-just a bad mental image is all! Dumbeldore- erection- watching...EWWWW!!! Keep up the great writing! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Killer K

This is wonderful writing. I like the tension between the main characters. The hospital scene was very, very hot. I noticed Albus expressing that little tendency of his . There are a lot of similarities between our stories...GMTA I guess. I can\'t wait for your next update. This work is absolutely delicious. More!

Oooo, evil cliffies! Great job, dearie! I find myself wanting more, more, more! Hope you can update soon! I am greatly looking forward to lots and lots of updates! With lots and lots of lovin\'(hint, hint!) ! You\'re doing such a terrific job! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Big kisses,
Killer K ;)

Wow, I\'m glad I got the popcorn out. This is an amazing story. I\'m enjoying reading it very much. Please continue.

Wow! Great writing, dearie! I really love the way you have blended Snape with your own character- and a muggle, no less! Poor Snape, though I love him as a smarmy git I also like to think that even he is capable of loving and being loved. Hope you continue on, you have me thoroughly intrigued! Update as soon as possible, and try not to be too discouraged by negligent reviewers. You have a real nack(is that spelled right?Too lazy to consult dictionary!) for writing and should pursue said course. Happy writing and hope to read some juicy scenes soon- hint, hint!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Eagerly awaiting,
Killer K :)

This is a fantastic story! I look forward to more chapters. *Comes back with popcorn* Don\'t make us wait too long!