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for Dual Worlds

by betsanne

person YsoiOtaku
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you combined Stargate and Harry Potter!!
Keep on writing!!! Love to know what happens next! ^___^
person LNR
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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MORE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Silver1
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay! This is really, really, good... I especially like the way you have jack and Daniel and Snape interacting. Absolutlely adored Snape's reaction when he saw that he was in outer space! Even the bit where Snape gets a little MORE interested in Dan/Harry and Dan/Harry thinks "not now.." or something like that. The concept that the witches ad wizards are really not completely human, but descended from Ancients, was wonderful!. I don't think that I have ever seen that idea in a fic before. Even the fact that Jack can do magic and was supposed to go to Hogwarts was great! I am anxious to see what else is going to happen, especially since there is Ancient tech in - or is - Hogwarts. Will they explain the Ga'ould to Snape and the other wizards? What other pairings will there be, if any? Please keep up the good work and update soonest!
person kallipso
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more of your great story. Please update soon.
person Shadow
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more chapters I love this story. It's really good and interesting. People are really selfish sometimes especially the wizarding world in this story or people in general. Why do they bother to have their "suppose" savior back again to save their asses when they just tried to make the savior's life a living hell five years ago. The friend I can understand but if Harry or Daniel now really want to leave the wizarding world and never come back he deserve the right to find some happiness while at it. SInce the wizarding world never give him much joy every since the day he went there. Those people are selfish jerks. I hope he will stay with his SG-1 team as his job to the muggle world. It will suck if he went back and stay in the wizarding world. I don't mind if he went back to the wizarding world along with his friends or backups to help out a bit and return home. The wizarding world really should relied on themselves also. Good Work. I like the friendship between Jack and Daniel it's really good to find good friends that don't stab you in the back or jealous of you because of something so stupid hint hint *Ron.* I don't like 'moine in this story she just so eager to find her friend and don't really think of what his friend want when he left the wizard world five years ago. Even if she miss him but it is still mean to kidnap someone to comeback for she don't even ask what he wanted when he clearly didn't want to come back period.
person swirly
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far this fic is looking good. A very enjoyable read. Is there more to come? Thanks for writing
person MystWynd
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this fic on another site, actually, don't remeber if I left a review there as well. Anyway just wanted to leave some more raves. I love this story so far. It keeps getting better and better with every chapter. Please update soon.

-MystWynd
person jess
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome
i like it how did hermione find out that danial is harry?
person silentcall
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1) Slash is good for the soul...and I think it adds an element of humor that is appreciated.

2) This is a great story. I was so ready to be disappointed...I didn\'t think it would live up to its potential. I\'m glad I was wrong and I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!

person Moonhunter
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story! I don\'t even know why! I want to steal your idea for Daniel being Harry Potter, if that\'s ok? Keep it up!