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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yummy
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This comment goes not only to your story, but to many stories in this forum. I understand you
need to release your fantasies, but except for the fact that you\'re giving the characters HP
names, what does it have to do with HP? You could just as well change the names to those of original
characters (which isn\'t bad), and you\'d still have the same story, with the same effect. If at
least you made a character assesment, it would sound more interesting in the HP context.
Else, it\'s just another smut story.
need to release your fantasies, but except for the fact that you\'re giving the characters HP
names, what does it have to do with HP? You could just as well change the names to those of original
characters (which isn\'t bad), and you\'d still have the same story, with the same effect. If at
least you made a character assesment, it would sound more interesting in the HP context.
Else, it\'s just another smut story.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I don\'t find these stories the least bit attractive. However, being pregnant, my raging hormones have me on over drive which means only one thing....you need to update this story, my dear. I think it does have potential and it has encouraged me to read more of these Sirius/Bellatrix stories. Please update soon, and have a full fledged sex scene between these two sexy cousins.
Love and Kisses
Sammie Curls and the baby
Love and Kisses
Sammie Curls and the baby
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story even though it\'s incest and everything but can see you play it off and it works really well.........mucho love to ya and hope the next chappie is on the way....-Cyn