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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey please write annother chapter soon. Im really curious as 2 wat happens nxt.
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad so far. I will definitely be looking forward for more chapters
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it is a wonderful story so far, and I can\'t wait until I can see where the plot\'s going. However, I kept getting distracted from the story because you incorrectly use quotation marks. You don\'t need to put quotation marks around each individual sentence, just when a character starts speaking and when they are finished. Also, when you switch characters speaking, begin a new paragraph.
Please hurry and finish this, I\'m curious to see what happens.
P.S. I love the thought of Snape dressing up as a bat. I t made me giigle ^_^
Please hurry and finish this, I\'m curious to see what happens.
P.S. I love the thought of Snape dressing up as a bat. I t made me giigle ^_^
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update! This is intriguing! Don\'t leave me hanging!!!!!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for more story! I love this!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start so far! I can\'t wait to find out what Ginny did to Hermione! Please update again and soon!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More More More
Please write more
Please write more
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not hard core about spelling, being dyslexic and all, but the gramatical errors make it very difficult to read. for dialouge the quates are placed aroung what the person is saying. example:
Bob sat down and said \"you should see the weather out there!\"
\"Really?\" Mary said in disbelief, \"it was beautiful earlier.\"
good luck.
maggie
Bob sat down and said \"you should see the weather out there!\"
\"Really?\" Mary said in disbelief, \"it was beautiful earlier.\"
good luck.
maggie