rate_review Reviews

Fabulous! Fabulous! I loved it all. \"Severus pulled her back roughly to the other side of the bed, like a carriage return\" - cool metaphor. House-Elves with teeth and their agressive history. Albus listening in (eek!).

Great new sex position - pushed up on the headboard, high in the air, wheelbarrow-style, for the more gymnastic of us to try out (nb: must have strong or magical bedframe).

The unexpected Final Battlescene and how they lived happily ever after - added almost as an afterthought, but it works.

Can\'t wait to read your next story. When\'s the novel coming out?

HOLY BUGGERY (heh) but that was HOT! I think I have a new favorite to go alongside my old fave of humor/romance/angst: angst/hot,mildly masochistic sex/more angst/love. I like the fact that you didn\'t turn Hermione into some kind of total submissive to Severus\' Dominant. Don\'t like those stories much. She\'s too damn ornery to ever be a true \"bottom.\" Hot, hot, hot!

Dang, that was so good I read parts 1 and 2 through a second time!!! And now I think I have the creative fire in my belly (snicker) to go finish a PWP I started ages ago that has been languishing for a while. (it\'s a SS/NT, but, hey, that pairing has its moments, too!) Whooooeeee! Hope to read more of your works.

That was perfect! The best ending ever! :) Excellent fic, easily one of the best I\'ve ever read. I\'m serious!

*sighs*
Well...what a lovely ride you took us on. I feel like my vacation is ending and now I must pack and go and rejoin the real world.
What a wonderful job you did of it too. I am pleased that you stuck with it and finished it. With so many fans, all over the globe, how can you ever feel bad agian? Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. Thank you for sticking to your guns and writing something few people dare to do with grace and depth. Myhat is off to you....*bows*

I loved it.. The whole bloody thing was great !!!
Thank You ...

*deepsigh* Such a perfect ending to a perfect story! Severus still scowling, but happily married and a father is a marvelous combination, really ;) I know I wrote it before, but I have to again to sum it all up: I LOVE IT! You got me hooked with part 1 and kept me reading and re-reading till now. My respect to your imagination, your style and your determination in creating such a beautiful, sexy story with characters that really come to life and enchant (and have the best sex imaginable ;) ). Thanks for sharing this story, it\'s been a blast :)

Yup, me again, just read your contribution to your review-page and had to answer right away: Snape and Hermione doing dark deeds in dark corners sounds like a veeeery sexy read ;) The love life you gave them is one hell of an \'inspiration\' *cough*, so keep it coming ;)

THIS WAS PROBABLY THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ....I APPLAUD YUOU AND I WOULD LUV TO READ MORE IF THEY ARE ANYTHING LIKE THIS ONE. GOOD WORK!!

One of the best HG/SS stories I\'ve ever read!

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*Applauds* Marvelous! THAT is an epilogue, and an ending! Brava! Bravissima! ...More, please! ;-D (Doesn\'t have to be this one, though...) Ever considered submitting these two stories as a single piece to www.RestrictedSection.org? I think they\'d love to have you there! (Don\'t forget; every time you submit it to a new place, it\'s a good idea to go over it first for catching errors that you didn\'t notice the first time around; I myself still find the nasty little buggers even on the fourth or fifth pass...*sigh*) Like I said, that was marvelous! ~Lotm